Wow. This is superb. First few paragraphs are full of pleasant sounds.
"What am I playing at? The drunk in Cohen’s midnight choir. I wish I was the bird. Have I tried to be free? In my way, only. Not the Way, the Truth, the Life. Didn’t I say the Incantation of Billy Graham? Lord, save!"
This moved me.
"The waters break through the firmament of my eyes."
Good stuff bro
YES! I read it yesterday and was going to comment but here it is. Great prose tricks here sir
This is very good
Wow. This is superb. First few paragraphs are full of pleasant sounds.
"What am I playing at? The drunk in Cohen’s midnight choir. I wish I was the bird. Have I tried to be free? In my way, only. Not the Way, the Truth, the Life. Didn’t I say the Incantation of Billy Graham? Lord, save!"
This moved me.
"The waters break through the firmament of my eyes."
A favorite, overdone anywhere but here!
Excellent work sir